Cold, Concrete, Anaphora/Epistrophe

Skating in This Winter’s Cold

I’ll hold you close in this winter’s cold.

Hold me as we skate across this ice

in this lonely wood. With you I feel

like I am gliding on air rather than

ice. You blush then kiss me. You

hold me as we skate across this

air-like ice in this winter’s cold,

the frosted trees lean to our

rhythm in this lonely wood.

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5 comments

  1. Cathy Lynn Brooks · October 15, 2015

    Very romantic.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. jacquelineobyikocha · October 15, 2015

    Sweet thoughts 🙂

    Like

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