Haiku About Screens

iPhone

My mind mesmerized,

constantly clouded merely

by meaningless apps.

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5 comments

  1. laurencarmen · October 5, 2015

    Hello! I am also very new to blogging, so I thought I would have a look at your poem. It’s simple, but effective! I really like it. Goodluck with everything!
    http://www.itslollypops.com

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  2. jacquelineobyikocha · October 5, 2015

    Good take on the prompt!

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  3. vronlacroix · October 5, 2015

    Clear meaning, and alliteration seems just right to me.

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  4. jgavinbergstrom · October 5, 2015

    Thank you Brittany, I am new to the blogosphere as well. I’ve been using Dr Gabrielle Rico’s “Writing the Natural Way” to spur my creativity. She developed a technique for “clustering” ideas that is truly useful.

    Thank you

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  5. Annie · October 5, 2015

    This is great! 🙂

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